Ramon/Discount Led/email teardown

Expired. Almost, seriously...

How Ramon built this send — a discount led email shipped as mixed / modular on Sunday at 7am, carrying a 20% % off offer. Below is Kujola's field-by-field extraction; the original creative is rendered at the end.

From: AfinacampaignPreheader: “Our biggest Holiday sale is here—enjoy a cleaner, healthier shower for up to 40% OFF. ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏ ͏
Offer
20% off
Voice warmth
0.65
Sent
Sun · 7am
Format
Mixed / modular
How this send compares
  • 20% off2.5 points shallower than the tracked set average of 22.5% (this brand averages 20.0% when it discounts).
  • Voice warmth 0.60 for Ramon vs 0.70 across the set — a cooler, more clinical register than the average competitor.
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Message & creative

Message theme
Discount Led
Creative format
Mixed / modular
Secondary: Product hero
Secondary theme
Clean Filtration
Hero headline
Try Afina Risk-Free
Emotional appeal
trust
Calendar moment
Holiday Gifting
02

Offer

Mechanic
% off
A percentage off the price — the most common kind.
Depth
20% off
Promo phase
Last chance
A deadline push — 'Ends tonight', 'Final hours'.
Promo code
[redacted]
Minimum spend
None
Urgency
Deadline-led
Expires Invalid Date
03

Voice & tone

Warmth0.65
ClinicalWarm
Formality0.45
CasualFormal
Reader focus0.75
“We”“You”
Expressiveness0.55
RestrainedExuberant

Reading grade 7.0 — the approximate US reading level of the body copy.

04

Call to action

Primary CTA
“SHOP NOW”
Destination
Product page
Links straight to a single product.
Verb framing
Shop / Buy
Direct buying words — 'Shop now', 'Add to bag'.
CTA count
10
Multi-CTA layout
Primary destination URL
ctrk.klclick.com
No UTM tagging detected
Tracking domain
ctrk.klclick.com
ESP fingerprint · Klaviyo
05

Deliverability posture

SPF
None
DKIM
Pass
DMARC
Pass
Policy: none
One-click unsubscribe
Supported (RFC 8058)
Unsub scheme: both
From alignment
Misaligned
Domain: subdomain
Footer hygiene
Minimal
06

Send timing

Day
Sunday
Local hour
7am
Send type
campaign
One-off campaign
07

Claims & products

Claims extracted
  • KDF-55 and calcium sulfite for superior purificationingredient · substantiated
  • Dermatologist recommendedefficacy · unsubstantiated
  • Proven to enhance skin and hair healthefficacy · unsubstantiated
  • 90-day money back guarantee — we'll even pay return shippingguarantee · substantiated
  • Fits all US shower heads; quick filter replacementefficacy · substantiated
Products featured
  • Afina Filtered Showerheadhero
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The creative

The original email as it rendered in the inbox. Shown for reference and sandboxed — it is not part of the indexed analysis above.