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UMBO/Social Proof/email teardown

Lost Your Edge? Try This

How UMBO built this send — a social proof email shipped as editorial / long-form on Friday at 12am, carrying a 10% % off offer. Below is Kujola's field-by-field extraction; the original creative is rendered at the end.

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Offer
10% off
Voice warmth
0.75
Sent
Fri · 12am
Format
Editorial / long-form
How this send compares
  • 10% off — 12.5 points shallower than the tracked set average of 22.5% (this brand averages 10.0% when it discounts).
  • Voice warmth 0.75 for UMBO vs 0.70 across the set — a warmer, more human register than the average competitor.
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Message & creative

Message theme
Social Proof
Creative format
Editorial / long-form
Secondary: Product hero
Secondary theme
Ingredient Efficacy
Hero headline
Lost Your Edge? Try This.
Emotional appeal
aspiration
Calendar moment
Evergreen
Not tied to a seasonal window.
02

Offer

Mechanic
% off
A percentage off the price — the most common kind.
Depth
10% off
Promo phase
Launch
The sale opens and the main offer is shown.
Promo code
[redacted]
Minimum spend
None
Urgency
None
03

Voice & tone

Warmth0.75
ClinicalWarm
Formality0.25
CasualFormal
Reader focus0.70
“We”“You”
Expressiveness0.80
RestrainedExuberant

Reading grade 7.0 — the approximate US reading level of the body copy.

04

Call to action

Primary CTA
“Shop Now”
Destination
Product page
Links straight to a single product.
Verb framing
Shop / Buy
Direct buying words — 'Shop now', 'Add to bag'.
CTA count
8
Multi-CTA layout
Primary destination URL
ctrk.klclick.com
No UTM tagging detected
Tracking domain
ctrk.klclick.com
ESP fingerprint · Klaviyo
05

Deliverability posture

SPF
None
DKIM
Pass
DMARC
Pass
Policy: none
One-click unsubscribe
Supported (RFC 8058)
Unsub scheme: both
From alignment
Misaligned
Domain: subdomain
Footer hygiene
Minimal
06

Send timing

Day
Friday
Local hour
12am
Send type
flow
Flow: welcome
07

Claims & products

Claims extracted
  • “Sustained energy throughout the day”efficacy · unsubstantiated
  • “Enhanced endurance and stamina”efficacy · unsubstantiated
  • “Sharper mental focus and clarity”efficacy · unsubstantiated
  • “Without a crash”efficacy · unsubstantiated
  • “Cordyceps, NAD+ Booster NR and Rhodiola to support energy, endurance, cognitive function, and mood”ingredient · unsubstantiated
  • “Certified organic mushrooms · Adaptogenic formula”ingredient · unsubstantiated
  • “Our bestseller at Umbo”ranking · unsubstantiated
Products featured
  • Myco Risebestseller
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The creative

The original email as it rendered in the inbox. Shown for reference and sandboxed — it is not part of the indexed analysis above.